‘The Kill Clause’ (2025) short story by Lisa Unger

Lisa Unger packed a whole movie’s worth of story into the seventy pages of ‘The Kill Clause’, a story about an assassin being pushed beyond her willingness to obey the people using her as a weapon. Much of it was a movie I felt I’d seen before, but it was still entertaining.

For me, the best part of the story was the backstory narrative of how Paige had been recruited when she was young, vulnerable, and alone, and then groomed to become an obedient assassin. It made her more human and explained her reluctance to follow the instructions that she’d been given. 

Much of the story was tense. The action sequences were engaging.

Although the events took place at Christmas, apart from adding some interesting emojis and a bit of pre-packaged pathos, the story didn’t make use of any seasonal themes or plot twists.

I felt the story was let down by the ending, which was perhaps the only part of the plot in which a Christmas miracle was performed. I didn’t believe the outcome, and that undermined my enjoyment of the story.

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