I bought “Snow” as a short story to help read myself into Christmas. Even though it’s set in October, it is a Christmas-related story albeit in an unconventional way.
I won’t go into to the story, other than to say that it involves some teens doing things they shouldn’t, a big bad who is a threat to them and some snow. Although the opening sentence reads:
“The night my friends and I almost triggered the next ice age, I was with Danny McDermott and Jackie Kagan”
I didn’t feel any real sense of threat in this story and certainly nothing that meant anything to anyone except some high school kids with a lot of growing up still to do.
The writing is slick and skilful. The pace is fast. The idea is novel. It’s a good goosebumps story to tell around a campfire.
But mostly what it is is disappointing. It fizzles out rather than ends. It never gets beyond a cartoon view of the world. This idea, in the hands of King or Simmons, might have been chilling. In Odentz’s hands, it’s a draft for pitching an episode in a teen high school drama.