‘Long Time Dead’ (2024) – Sheridan Holler #1 by T. M. Payne – abandoned at 20%

I think a lot of people will like this book and follow the series but it’s not for me.

A Long Time Dead‘ has a good plot populated by lots of interesting and believable women.

The exposition was smooth, with information being disclosed not just by following DI Holler and her team but through what I learned following other characters. I liked the way this invited me to put the pieces together for myself and sometimes gave me the feeling that I was ahead of Holler and her team. I also liked that the police are shown as competent and collaborative, avoiding the cliché of the lone Detective working hard and still getting grief from their less-than-competent boss. The police procedures and the atmosphere in the team felt real to me.

I liked that most of the people who move the plot forward are women and that the women are very different from one another.

The story is set in Liverpool but I didn’t feel any strong connection to the place or its people. The place names were right but other than that, this could have been in Manchester.

The writing is light and confident.The individual scenes, like the first killing and the one with the grave digger, are vivid, dramatic and memorable.

So why have I set it aside at 20%?

My problem was that I felt I was getting a camera-eye view of the events and the characters that never took me beneath the surface to deal with things a camera wouldn’t catch. I know that this style works well for many people. It reminds me of some of Ann Cleeves’ novels and, like those novels, I’d be happy to watch this as a TV programme but I wasn’t getting enough traction to keep me engaged with it as a novel.


T. M. Payne was born in Lee-On-Solent, Hampshire and now lives on the Wirral with her partner.

 Having worked in the criminal justice system for 18 years, the last 14 of which she was a Police Case Investigator within the Domestic Violence Unit, she has now taken a break to concentrate on her passion for writing crime novels.

Her Detective Sheridan Holler series will be published by Amazon Publishing in 2024 and 2025.

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